（审题拓展）
图中年轻人弃桨而卧，任由船只四下漂泊。在图片标题的提示下，图片所反映的社会问题可以理解为“现代青年放弃理想、放弃努力、任由命运安排”，本图呼吁年轻一代摒弃这种消极心态。行文时，建议考生在第一段简要描述图片并说明图片寓意——人缺失了理想，就像船只失去了桨；在第二段结合社会现状，指明这种社会心理的原因及不良影响；在第三段可以提出相关建议。
文章脉络及主要内容如下：
第一段，描述图片，点名寓意：批判当下有些年轻人对理想或生活主动权的放弃；
第二段，结合现实，道明因果：很多年轻人在父母包办的人生和程式化的生活中，不顾及自己的理想，放弃努力，失去自我：
第三段，提出建议，展望未来：家庭沟通，重建哩想；偶像激励，寻求动力。
习作典范
It is astonishing to find in the caxtoon that a man drops the paddle into the lake， leaving the uncontrolled boat drifting about.By this metaphor， the cartoonist endows us a principle that an individual without aspiration is just like a boat without oar.Simple as the scene looks， it is a timely warning to any young man who lacks thought of future.
Currently， most youngsters are living in a society in which their futures have been planned and prepared by their parents.So， it seems unnecessary for them to strive for their own ideals.However， the ease and comfort may deprive them of their control over their lives and their stxength to develop， leaving them wasting their minutes， hours， days and then years of life.In the life "scheduled" by parents and "executed passively" by them， they may lose their planning or scheming of their own life， and in turn lose their courage to strive for excellence. It is borrible to imagine a world full of ideal—deprived people.
To prevent youngsters getting unmotivated or undirected， we must take actions right now.One effective measure is family—discussion. That is， by regular discussions， senior family members should help young adults figure out what roles they are willing to be and how they can adapt themselves to the parts.
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